Great description. Nice title.

~Twilight Starr~

A bit empty of inspiration from my point of view, though I loved the last two lines. It gave such a continuation of this, lush. I didn't know what to expect, and I'm glad because I was pleasantly surprised. Keep up the great work, peace.

**. i am such a moron. i forget to review one of my favorite authors. this is...gorgeous, surreal, dream0like: perfect. lovelovelovelove the tone, the first to last line the whole damn thing, if you want me to be bitterly honest). lovelovelove the "she is swallowed by the universe" line: it was so perfect, inspiring. LOVE.

~* noelle

oh i love how everything's so pretty but with that tinge of bitterness in it, the imagery's really, really good.

god, you're amazing. 'nymph-glitter hait' 'angry red lipstick' 'whisper-scented river' you make everything sound so ** beautiful it almost frightens me.

oh man, i love the imageryand the way the last line kinda floors the whole poem. nice job.

oh...likeness. very interesting. Visual, but only because of the title, otherwise it could be expansive. Excellent words. I adore the effect of the first line.

"her body speaks in ripples

and she's groundless"

Gorgeous!

i don't know what it is about this peice, but i really like it... major props to you =D

ooh la la very pretty.