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| briannathewriter 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful lyrics but you should up the rating by one for the one swear word in there, not to be picky or anything. Just consider it. Also, on the first line you have an I don't it's written as "Idont". Fix these and your poetry will be perfect. I enjoyed reading it. |
| deathbyeuphoria 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuse"I picked the petals off the flowers,and each one told me you loved me not.But I didn't listen to nature, no." ~~I absolutely adored that part of this poem/song. Nice job on this. |