Sounds interesting... Can't wait for more... Just thought I'd mention this but you said in the first chapter that the little girl is 10 and if they ran away when their mother was still pregnant with her and Sebastian was 17 when they ran away wouldn't that make him 27 right now and not 22 cuz if hes 22 then that means he ran away when he was 12... Just wondering...

Can't wait to find out who "him" is.

This has to be one of the longest update times ever. 8D Over two years, wow.

Well, it's a neat story so far. I liked Chapter 2 the best, had to re-read Chapter 1 after I realized I didn't remember the story (*blush*).

Though I think you're making the cops too weepy! Then again, I've never met Sebastion or heard his music, so who am I to judge.

Looking forward to Chapter 3. Just how much is Sebastion willing to share to try to put his father in jail and protect his never-met sister?

Plus, the romance, tee hee.

PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!

You seem to have some trouble with continuing stories, which is a shame because they all have great potential.

I hope you decide to continue. ^^

I am very much diggin' this. Please continue!

Oh I love this. Please continue this one too. You are a very good writer, especially since you are so young. What a great talent. Thank you for sharing this with us.

It's very good, I'd like to follow this, but it is a bit confusing. Sebastionj Deveroy is Sebastion Donovan? and is he the brother of the two boys abused by their father? and the girl? It's very confusing, but it's good, I would enjoy more

I'm interested. What can I say? The summery caught my eye. ^_~ Please update!!

Interesting idea.

I like how you've lead up to the initial conversation with Sebastian that I'm guessing will be in the next chapter and I can't wait to see what he's like. The way you've contrasted his personality to his music is cool.

Hoping to read more and don't worry about your editing, Its not like really all that noticable.

So is Howard going to be man #1? Or at least...be the one to take care of Sebastion?

i like the way this is going. you're very descriptive in the images of the characters. your grammar is a little off but i've seen worse. just saying now, if you don't write another chapter, no matter what other reviewers say, i'm gonna find out who you are and track you down and go to your bedroom window and throw rapid squirrels inside until you write more.a little crazy sounding but oh well. sayonara

please do continue, this could turn out great. i'm already intrested in reading the rest...