Hey babe.. I don't know if I ever got around to telling you how much I liked this, so I am now. *smile*

It's a gorgeous poem, lovely. You did great.

It's been more than a year since you updated, so I don't know if you'll even be getting this review, but

dude, where were you? you had some of us worried. far as the poem goes, i've never liked haikus much... but even your few words builds such an image in my head.

Take care
katie

It came out wonderfully as all your poetry seems to do. Good job with the haiku.

I think it turned out okay too.

Peace, Daze

this was very good.

^_^ Lovely haiku! Well done. Write on!

~Anna~

I like it. I've just started writing haiku, hopefully I'll have a few posted soon.