marianita honestamente te puedo decir que estoy cansada de que escribas lo mismo una y otra vez, me gusta como escribes, te lo he dicho, pero no cambia en absoluto.

por supuesto ha evolucionado desde q empezaste ha escribir en ingles, tiene algunas faltillas aqui y alla, pero francamente quien no, eh?

btw, que tal esta la escuela? en estos momentos te escribo desde aix en provence, france. super cool, no?

kiss kiss, sweet cheeks.
marisa

This is beautiful. Your writing style is haunting and wonderfully poetic and, although there were a few instances where the grammar could be improved (a few tense changes - nothing a good read through won't sort out) you have an amazing natural talent that I'm completely envious of.

I hope that you're able to continue soon - there's so much I want to know, like what the accident is all about etc. I'm completely attached!

mars ve todo lo q me tarde en leerlo jaja tuve q volver a leer pq ya no recordaba q onda con esta historia pero felicidades por la renovada inspiracion :D ya que regreses muy pronto comentaremos como va eso. por ahora muy bn, espero seguir leyendote pronto

going good so far...its definately different... keep it up!
shana

LOVE IT!?!?!?

cerdo! jajaja hace mucho q no me gustaba tanto algo q escribias realmente en tu top 5 d capitulos. o bueno chance y es q hace mucho q no escribias at all. ojala t la estes pasando super bn en acapulco con carola, me la saludas y ps q mal q ya no las pude acompanar jajaja y ojala tbn ia estes mejor d tu pansa pero bueno t quiero t cuidas

esta historia será un exito por capitulos en el periodico de la escuela jaja como dijo harry esta muy bien escrita, muy m intramental jajaja y sera bueno mostrarla cuando seas famosa y te pidan cual fue una de tus primeras historias.
es un hermoso final, muy real, muy triste pero bueno, ambas sabemos q tenemos gustos literarios y musicales tristes y asi es la vida... sigue con esta historia, pero recuerda q tus lectores prefieren calidad a cantidad asi q no presiones a benjamin jaja tq

Hi, I don't know why I missed this when you first published it. I really like the words you're using to describe how Liss feels about her relationship and situation with Ben. I like this line, "I wanted so much more. And most of the times he offered me so little and ...this imperfect cocoon built of wounds." Your writing has a poetic feel to it and it makes the heavy issues that both character have somewhat beautiful. I really hope my review and reviews from other readers boost your inspiration for the next chapter to come out sooner because the big gap between chapter one and two kinda scares me, hehe. Thanks.

wow i am so confused

but that just makes me more eager for an update

This is amazing..do continue.

beautiful.. and i'm warned, this was a one ot, but there are just too many Qs i'd like to ask.. let's leave those for he suspence ;D rock on!

I know I've left a comment in DA, but anyway, I love this, I... love it. There's something in this... ah!

Oh my, I really like that.

... nice... (:

REALLY AWESOME SHORT STORY!! I specially liked the ending, about the teachings he left. So beautiful. And I liked how you expressed the variety in life through music styles. Really great! Just wondering? Is this love a one hit wonder? Or are you going to write more?

Love,Pam