War-obsessed much?

Another nice one. Interesting take on the assignment.

Good job, friend! Even if this did depress me a little... ha.

A short but sweet one. Any particular place you got the name Dogul from? (A combo of "Du Gaulle" and "Mogul"?)

*adds to favorites* Really, there ought to be more reviews.

Very good job at doing the two perspectives thing, though I'm not sure if that's quite two perspectives on the war. Maybe. I'd have to think about it a little bit.

I guess what I mean to say is that you do a nice job juxtaposing the two people and their situations. That can be quite difficult to do without sounding choppy.

My only criticism is that I don't think you need the last dividing line. You don't use them at any other time in the story, and it seems a little odd for it to be there.

Again, nice job. :P I /told/ you that you could write something short for a change.