Interesting, though not the best poem ever. Your lines that begin with "ed" confused me at first, until I realized you were breaking apart words. You might want to watch your parentheses a little more. There's a right parenthesis with no left, which throws off the reader. if you're trying to do something "modern" and "crazy" then okay. But it's really not very clear. You mention, "(after / all, ContemporaryArt is undefin / ed)." Okay. I don't agree with this. "Art" or what is wrongfully called "art" has devolved into rambling trash. It NEEDS to be defined. "ContemporaryArt", like any other art, craves a definition so that it might matter in the world, and leave a mark--not ephemeral lines of incoherent free verse. But yes, I did like your poem.

Almost amusing in its reflections - perhaps its the tone of the character.

A very interesting style that I don't believe I've seen before; crucially, you make it work well.

Interesting thoughts...

Wow. There was a nice flow, emphasized by techniques - the repetition of words, for instance - that really worked and really surprised me, although that's probably just because I'm not a poet. However, I am a writer, and there was something very writer-esque about that poem - though ironically, I'm having a hard time explaining exactly how I'm feeling that.

It was just...'wow'. You know how things can just be 'wow', sometimes? It was like that.

I really like the irony in this poem.

EB

Very interesting...

Why put the past tense on the next line??

Your style is unique and the you have a talented way for leading your reader and making them think. ^..^

i like it. i dont really know why i just do.