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With Rhyme and Reason 2006-05-18 ch 1,	Interesting, though not the best poem ever. Your lines that begin with "ed" confused me at first, until I realized you were breaking apart words. You might want to watch your parentheses a little more. There's a right parenthesis with no left, which throws off the reader. if you're trying to do something "modern" and "crazy" then okay. But it's really not very clear. You mention, "(after / all, ContemporaryArt is undefin / ed)." Okay. I don't agree with this. "Art" or what is wrongfully called "art" has devolved into rambling trash. It NEEDS to be defined. "ContemporaryArt", like any other art, craves a definition so that it might matter in the world, and leave a mark--not ephemeral lines of incoherent free verse. But yes, I did like your poem.
La Gitane 2006-04-05 ch 1,	Almost amusing in its reflections - perhaps its the tone of the character. A very interesting style that I don't believe I've seen before; crucially, you make it work well. Interesting thoughts...
Move Mercury 2006-04-04 ch 1,	Wow. There was a nice flow, emphasized by techniques - the repetition of words, for instance - that really worked and really surprised me, although that's probably just because I'm not a poet. However, I am a writer, and there was something very writer-esque about that poem - though ironically, I'm having a hard time explaining exactly how I'm feeling that. It was just...'wow'. You know how things can just be 'wow', sometimes? It was like that.
Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-03-17 ch 1,	I really like the irony in this poem. EB
Kat-Renee Kittel 2006-03-04 ch 1,	Very interesting... Why put the past tense on the next line?? Your style is unique and the you have a talented way for leading your reader and making them think. ^..^
Rising Hope 2006-01-24 ch 1,	i like it. i dont really know why i just do.

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