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| contrast and friction 2006-01-24 ch 1,   | This is beautiful. It really manages to capture the consequences of war. The images you have created through your words are very vivid. I love the repetition of 'mercy, mercy' because it ties the piece nicely together & really emphasises your point. Really good job with this one :) |