This is HILARIOUS! I love it! are you going to finish it? please say you will!

Oh that was marvelous. Please consider writing another part, I'd love to see how the Princess reacts to being rescued. ~Vic

God I haven't laughed that much in weeks. You have to continue this line of story. I'd like to know what's up with the fair Princess Adrienne...there's bound to be a story to it. This is a hoot!

What a perfect midnight snack to have stumbled across. ;)

Oh God, that was good. There shouldn't even be a question of whether or not?

You're updating. Plain and simple.

Hilarious, fresh. The confused dragon was a brilliant touch. Well done.

I absolutely loved this story! Well written and very funny. Highly entertaining. I especially like the dragon. And when he first started speaking, saying, "Fe, fi, fo..." And then the next line: "Wrong line, you daft lizard!" Is this a one-shot piece, or do you plan to continue it a little more?

Hilarious! Great going! Intertextuality at its best!

A couple of small points to tweak:1. Cra-Steelhoof is a gelding, right? Why is it that the old man (Garben) pokes his cane at the -mare- at the beginning? 2. Jon kills the dragon by pointing his -lanceat- the dragon... Small typo there. (I thought it was a new word until I reread that.)

Looking forward to more!

Brilliant writing! It was fairly long, but it was fun to read all the way through. I love how it showcased the "dark" (read: funny) side of heroism and dragonslaying and stuff.

Great!

lol, it was awesome, some great humour in there. It'd b awesome if u made a good rpoper story out of that, maybe following on after this to what the princess is like and detailing Falcon's training as a page in more detail. Well done write more

Haha, really fun stuff. Plus you write really well. This is really good. Update! Really update! (What can I say, I'm extremely articulate. Not.)