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| monichi 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abusei loved it. adored the focus on red and blood. it really seemed as if i saw thick strokes of vivid red across the screen. P.S: love the screen name. teh tarik rocks. |
| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abusekonichi wa That was take-my-breath-away amazing. Wow. The imagery was so vivid and detailed, and every word seemed to intertwine perfectly with the others ... And that makes no sense, but ... :P "origami/of bloodied tissue" was an awesome way to start this. Origami sounds beautiful, gentle, etc. "Of bloodied tissue" obviously --well-- doesn't. Blunt. A shock when you first begin to read (kudos). "a woman sits impaled/on her thorn throne" also sends a clear picture of the opposites your poem portrayed. I'm trying to come up with a satisfactory word to describe my thoughts, but I don't seem to really be too great at that. Sorry ... This is definitely being added to my favorites list. Kudos again. Beautiful. Poetic, though that's not very helpful. Zaijen -Shan- |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abusevery creepy.. love those last 2 lines... awesome job |
| dolphin_seagreen 2006-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood to see you have started posting stuff on again.. This one's beyond me.. You're too far ahead in terms of style of writing.. Gonna publish a book one day? |
| poetic abortion 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseso beautiful, really. the first few lines were hauntingly eloquent and the last two/three lines, in particular, where quite extravogent. i love the "a woman sits implaed/on her thorn throne" 'thorn throne' is such a tongue twister! lovelovelove that line, i just had such vivid images and thoughts streaming onto paper when i read that. this is quite fabulous. i mean-yeah. it is. ~* noelle |
| pale doll 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI was so happy when I got your review. I am seriously honored because I adore your poetry so much. You're a wonderful writer. =] My favourite one has got to be "the lipsthe bitten satin" That is so amazing, I can't get over it. I'm sitting here reading it over and over, I love it ♥ |
| Ayx 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseYou always had a wonderful way with words and I'm just so happy to read something from you again. This was just real powerful imagery. The first like was just beautiful. Ayx |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abusei like this! very beautifully done! |