I love this piece, there is a wonderfully rye sense to it, as well as a fabulous flow and excellent use of words.

One of the best I've read of yours tonight without doubt.

Very Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

a lovely peice of satire I must say.

I love the playfulness of this - the mood and internal dialogue; it's very synical yet also very meaningful. Well done, it's refreshing to read poems that take on this tone.

Much love,Juliet,

lol, I didn't really get it get it... but it sure was interesting.