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| Ruby Mae 2006-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseMmhmm... nice flow... nice wording... |
| Ellin Louise 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is very interesting, it appears to be using those cliches that sometimes make painful emotions easier to bear, or at least seem to... sometimes when things get hard people long to have a more tangable problem... but they don't. (If that makes sense.. I'm having issues putting this into words...) anyway, good poem. |
| in theory 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseSo direct, sensational. |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abusei really like this! a simplistic style, but actually quite deep. love it! |
| kvnchn 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abusethat was actually pretty cool, dude! ~|{3\/1[]\[]~ |