love it.

the title, the metaphor, the tone, the humor, the format.

wonderful little piece.

.:midnight:.

*laughs* That was pretty good, and the analogy does work, if you think about it for a while. Liked the bit about hitchhiking home best, I think, even though the conclusion was good.

hehe... funny.

i haven't seen many people use page breaks in their poetry-- that's unique... sort of a stop/start thing going on. interesting comparison...

HYSTERICAL, babe! omg that was so funny. so great. i dont know you so sorri if you're weirded out but yeah that rocked.

wait! i've heard this story! and it reminds me of something but i can't think of what. possibly "when you give a moose a muffin"...

Hah, the ending is lovely.