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| ayenelle 2008-09-10 ch 1,  | abuseoh WOW. simply amazing(: it was just so creepy and dark and just plain intruiging ! it gave me goosebumps ~ seriously, talk about killing innocence here with this story. i absolutely love love love LOVE it(: |
| Kasey's Twilight 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abuse:( That was so sad. Stories like this make my insides turn to mush. I hate it, the idea of children being murdered, but the story was very good. |
| MalikiDragon 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThat's one of the most make-you-think stories i'v read in a long time. Thank you for being amazing. |
| just-drop-dead520 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusewhoa scary, but I love it. |
| LemonVanilla 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's... so sad. :( In a good kinda way, though. So saad. *runs off crying* |
| Out of the Blue 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseIt was an amazing but tragic story. Such powerful meaning. The words planted an image in my head and it's just...wow. |
| HawkDancer 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was very interesting. I liked it. It'd make a great Halloween story. =] |
| Mean titan 2007-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think that I am going to have nightmares. But that was so amazing. |
| How She Dances 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI loved how you went back and forth from the news to the kids. It seemed to add tension and hint at what was to come. Great one shot! |
| katie killjoy 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it but one of the little news parts I didn't quite enjoy because it is something that is in a song I have heard. "an eye for an eye and we'd all be blind" it is just one of those things that gets overdone. otherwise i enjoyed it |
| Agent Raindrop 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abusewow. this is so incredibly powerful and the whole time you were just trying to peice it all together and oh the suspence! I love I really really love it. Its so sad and tragic. but just wow... |
| Hyperroll 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusethat was.. so powerful. i love how you encompassed what the murder of the children was like to the rest of the world. like, like something so small to the world was the cause of such fear and.. and tragedy to the children. and the fact that they just wanted to build a ** snowman makes it even more depressing. |
| she ain't comin' back again 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abusethis was definitely creepy, and the parts in italics only added to the suspense; you knew something bad was going to happen. it actually kind of reads like a movie, at least for me. |
| bittersweetsuicide 2006-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abusethat is definitely going on my creepy list |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuseWow... beautiful. Almost horrificly so. I absolutely loved the last few lines. |