OMFG. THIS. IS AMAZING.
I don't usually read horror because I'm a scaredy-cat but your summary drew me in and your writing...So good. I love this. It seems so real. I hate it too because it seems so real. Why is there such evil in the world?
Anyways, you're awesome. That's pretty much what I'm trying to say. :D

Good but short, I would like to know his motivations, more of the back story. Right now it just seems unfinished.

Oh my god! I have a weird love/hate feeling to you right now! :(

This was SOO intense. I was nearly about to cry in the end especially when the little girl was on the phone with the police :( for some reason, i was expecting (well, hoping) that she would survive! :(

This recurrence kept sending chills down my spine: "Black eyes met green."

Brilliant story.

hey.. this was really nice... and i kind of cried at the end...

dude. that was crazy. i think with your writing, every word contributes to the effect you have-its all just so suspenseful, even in the beginning when everyone was happy and innocent and they were just going to build a snowman, for chrissakes.

you make your characters so real-i especially liked the line in the beginning that said, 'sticks and stones...' because that's what children are taught. your characters were just such real children, trying to be mature and trying to grow up. they never got the chance... gah.

but my favorite part is the last line. jeez. "and now for the weather".

that's. like, ingenious.

kthxbye.

Wow. That was intense. I loved it!

They just wanted to build a snowman.

That was depressing, and I loved it. I cried. Not sobbed, but you did me enough damage. Heh heh. The words italics and the suspense they brought was powerful. And Jeff and Hattie's cute relationship/friendship- there was something so eerie and sad in the fact that they were never able to continue, or even recognize it.

You write depressing stories, eh, eh. rawr

I like it :D

woah...

oh WOW. simply amazing(: it was just so creepy and dark and just plain intruiging ! it gave me goosebumps seriously, talk about killing innocence here with this story. i absolutely love love love LOVE it(:

:(

That was so sad. Stories like this make my insides turn to mush. I hate it, the idea of children being murdered, but the story was very good.

That's one of the most make-you-think stories i'v read in a long time. Thank you for being amazing.

whoa scary, but I love it.

That's... so sad. :( In a good kinda way, though.

So saad. *runs off crying*

It was an amazing but tragic story. Such powerful meaning. The words planted an image in my head and it's just...wow.