I like it :D

woah...

oh WOW. simply amazing(: it was just so creepy and dark and just plain intruiging ! it gave me goosebumps ~ seriously, talk about killing innocence here with this story. i absolutely love love love LOVE it(:

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That was so sad. Stories like this make my insides turn to mush. I hate it, the idea of children being murdered, but the story was very good.

That's one of the most make-you-think stories i'v read in a long time. Thank you for being amazing.

whoa scary, but I love it.

That's... so sad. :( In a good kinda way, though.
So saad. *runs off crying*

It was an amazing but tragic story. Such powerful meaning. The words planted an image in my head and it's just...wow.

Wow, this was very interesting. I liked it. It'd make a great Halloween story. =]

I think that I am going to have nightmares. But that was so amazing.

I loved how you went back and forth from the news to the kids. It seemed to add tension and hint at what was to come. Great one shot!

I really liked it but one of the little news parts I didn't quite enjoy because it is something that is in a song I have heard. "an eye for an eye and we'd all be blind" it is just one of those things that gets overdone. otherwise i enjoyed it

wow. this is so incredibly powerful and the whole time you were just trying to peice it all together and oh the suspence! I love I really really love it. Its so sad and tragic. but just wow...

that was.. so powerful. i love how you encompassed what the murder of the children was like to the rest of the world. like, like something so small to the world was the cause of such fear and.. and tragedy to the children.

and the fact that they just wanted to build a ** snowman makes it even more depressing.

this was definitely creepy, and the parts in italics only added to the suspense; you knew something bad was going to happen. it actually kind of reads like a movie, at least for me.