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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-12 ch 1,   | Lovely, o the imagery! the heart and compassion. |
| WingedAssassin 2006-02-09 ch 1, | you + necks = ... hehe... i like the spacing of this one. it makes it more... flow-y, i guess, closer to actual skin than a big ol' block of text would be. |
| Raspberry Twirl 2006-01-25 ch 1, | very nice. good metaphores! you truly drew me in. |