Beautiful in its simplicity and honesty and intensitiy.

oh, I really identify with this one, now. I liked the rhyme and meter of that last stanza - "show me the way/show me where to be/ help me please/help me find/my destiny." The desperation and plainitveness is so well expressed and what everyone feels as they get older and start to realize that it's up to them to figure things out in the long run. very touching.