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Reviews For: to the boy i can't resist

Katterree Fengari
2006-05-31
ch 1,
Has he discovered the first two, then? Interesting poem...
Jezsh
2006-02-04
ch 1,
this is so delicate and resigned, really pretty. I like the tone a lot, almost like a sigh. Great work.
White Tea and Ginger
2006-01-28
ch 1,
oh, love this one.

Keep writing.
Loveisalabor
2006-01-27
ch 1,
This poem is so true for me. Nice use of brackets. It lets the reader kinda hear a little voice in the back of their head.
relying on youth
2006-01-26
ch 1,
How many other weak spots can there be? haha...

Cute.
HatredsGirl
2006-01-25
ch 1,
freakin amazing
white-chokolat
2006-01-25
ch 1,
astonishing...truly astonishing
in theory
2006-01-24
ch 1,
This is fundamentally *always*, entirely what I sit up late at night and think about, in a few lines. Perfectly expressed.
sloppy firsts
2006-01-24
ch 1,
That first line is beautiful. Good write
just a teardrop
2006-01-24
ch 1,
aww i like this! short but so beautiful. great job!
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