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| Katterree Fengari 2006-05-31 ch 1, | Has he discovered the first two, then? Interesting poem... |
| Jezsh 2006-02-04 ch 1, | this is so delicate and resigned, really pretty. I like the tone a lot, almost like a sigh. Great work. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-01-28 ch 1, | oh, love this one. Keep writing. |
| Loveisalabor 2006-01-27 ch 1, | This poem is so true for me. Nice use of brackets. It lets the reader kinda hear a little voice in the back of their head. |
| relying on youth 2006-01-26 ch 1, | How many other weak spots can there be? haha... Cute. |
| HatredsGirl 2006-01-25 ch 1, | freakin amazing |
| white-chokolat 2006-01-25 ch 1, | astonishing...truly astonishing |
| in theory 2006-01-24 ch 1, | This is fundamentally *always*, entirely what I sit up late at night and think about, in a few lines. Perfectly expressed. |
| sloppy firsts 2006-01-24 ch 1, | That first line is beautiful. Good write |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-24 ch 1, | aww i like this! short but so beautiful. great job! |