Tells a great story... leaves me wondering if the two girls became friends, or if the girl next door had moved house... or even just moved on.

...Possibly my favorite yet.

Reminds me of 1,0,0 different things.

But by the end of it I thought of the holocaust.. and how when the Jews were living in the ghettos, but they were still right next door to the other people. And then one day you come home and she's not in her house anymore.

But the rest of the poem didn't sound like that...

I love it though.

Really.

pretty.

lovely; this is so divine.

* noelle

lol that reminds me of that movie... i don't know the name but i've only seen one part of it and i've seen that part 5 times. 5! it's that movie with Robert Redford (say he's RR) and another chick (say she's Hot Chick). It went like:RR: You sure you dont' want to stay for a drink?Hot Chick: No, I've really got to go.[gets up to leave]RR: I once felt love.[Hot Chick stops in her tracks]RR: It was on this train. It was this girl that sat across from me and when I looked at her she would look away and when she looked at me, I looked away. When the train stopped, we got off and we never saw each other again.[pause]RR: Are you sure you don't way to stay for a drink?Hot Chick: Yes... yes... I'd like to stay for a drink[RR pours her a drink]RR: Do you want to dance?and blahblah. jeez,. wait... i forget why i said that...