what a striking ending. this one hurts.

You.

I love you.

And the last line is amazing.

the ending breaks my heart.

actually, the whole damn thing.

[this is so perfect it hurts.]

~* noelle

whoa... kinda vulgar in the beginning... then kinda dies away... until it's like... peace... with roses dying in its vase... LOVE IT! =D

~|{3\/1[]\[]~

The ending really strikes hard for some reason. Good write

aww :( some really stunning lines! i love the lasts one. really gorgeous. great job!