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Reviews For: Tears of the Forsaken

0tomorrow0
2007-10-02
ch 6,
This was really good. But yeah, I agree with Devil N. Red - I feel as if the ending was cut short. But I can't believe Marie died! Boohoo! *sob* T_T ...oh well.
Sara Lux
2006-08-06
ch 6,
It was captivating.Made me feel like I was there.I want to know more of Damiens history and maybe what he doing through the centuries.
Archeia
2006-07-03
ch 6,
I'm crying, I'm not even kidding you! You are one of THE best writers!! By the Light Bearer that was good! I'm so sad and happy and filled with emotions!! =O I can't find any words to describe this!! ARG! >O
Archeia
2006-07-02
ch 4,
By the Light Bearer!! This is insane!! You are one of THE best writer EVER!! Such a sad story! *cries*
Karen
2006-06-10
ch 6,
Wow!! That was so good! I'm sure that you don't need to hear that, though, and you've heard it many times before! You said in your profile that someone's publishing you? I'm hoping to get published soon, but I'm not sure how to go about it. How are you doing it? Mail me back if you can!

K@ren
crelady
2006-06-09
ch 6,
I thought it was great. And loved the end. :) One of the best stories I've read of this kind & others.
The Banshee's Tears
2006-01-30
ch 6,
This was amazing! Excellent story and you're very talented. Keep up the amazing work. pip pip
Devil N. Red
2006-01-24
ch 6,
This was a good story but to me the ending didn't quite feel right. It felt like it was cut short somehow. Maybe it's just me.

Good style and very precise detail given to the emotions expressed. Keep it up and whatever you do, don't change the way you write just because someone tells you to.
toxic-noodle725
2006-01-24
ch 6,
that was a good story. keep it up!
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