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Reviews For: Collections 101

Jeweline 2008-06-03 ch 7,	abuseI really like this story! I read the whole seven chapters in 3 hours, no lie! I would LOVE to see more soon! I'm also going to start reading some of your other works, but I hope to for an update for this as soon as possible :] -J
Jeweline 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuse.W.O.W. Okay, seriously, I'm hooked. First chapters really need to captivating for me to continue reading, and TRUST me, I'm dying for more. So, reading on I am. :] -J
ninjakiddo 2008-05-28 ch 7,	abuselove it!
Stang65 2007-04-13 ch 7,	abuseI like this story a LOT! It took me a while to get into it, but I'm now thoroughly hooked!!
koyama meryl 2006-09-16 ch 6,	abuseCollections 101 hello ^^, i just read your story colletions 101 and i‘m shocked to see you have no more reviews. it is very good, no 08/15 story (in my country it‘s a common sentence for storys without much story or so similar like a lot of outhers and so without new ideas). do you now why i must grin not last time before? mom fp.com has a lot of problems with the page (often i can‘t read without one times they say sorry try it later blabla) and so i look to the other two storys i choose to read in the near futur and voila, i read your name one time and a second time too. ^_^ so, i think i am a reader who do you will see more often. (maybe, i‘m a often to laszy to write a comment, okay, often because in english the people doesn‘t rewrite and so i think they doesn‘t a review from a person with an other native language than english) i hope i can read chapter 7 soon and find out, that you write more in the next time. cu meryl koyama ^^y
lilylupin7 2006-08-27 ch 7,	abuseThis is a really interesting society you've created.
vesta-star 2006-04-10 ch 7,	abusehi there!! i just came across this story n i hv to say it's brilliant!the characters unique n different! i can't wait for the next update!
grumpirah 2006-03-14 ch 7, anon.	abusei like Jackal, his jealousy is too cute. Can't wait for the next update.
WootWoot 2006-03-13 ch 7, anon.	abuseoh a love square! It is getting really iteresting! Good Job!
Abigail Radle 2006-02-10 ch 5,	abuseEnjoyed this chapter.The interactions between Jackal and Lynx are the parts I like the most, personally. Jackal is an interesting character.Angel, however, is not that likeable at this point. He's like a third wheel. The arrogant teen that has the "I get what I want" mindset and all it does is make you want to knock him down a few notches.I'm assuming you know where you're going with this (or that the characters do) but I would rant and rave and throw a major hissy fit if Angel manages to make more headway with Lynx than Jackal does. He's just annoying. Like a mosquito buzzing around your ear or something. lol Love this story though, and look forward to the next update!
CrAzEd_ReViEwEr 2006-01-27 ch 4, anon.	abusecool ** story, i wish I was a bounty hunter now..lol, i like your characters, especially Lynx(great name, btw). Sexual tension is good thing. can't wait for the next chapter!
Abigail Radle 2006-01-26 ch 3,	abuseHmm. Wonder if that last bit means the bodyguards are going to show up and try to kill Jackal?Hope not.Anyways, thus far I like how you've depicted the characters and allowed the plot to develop a great deal. I look forward to reading more, also.

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