I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Are you going to continue writing this story?
It was going great!

This story is really great. I'm not usually a fan of science fiction, but what you;ve done is really original and imaginative. The introduction of Blaze in the last chapter was a great twist.. and though he is hot, I'm rooting for Jack.

I really like this story! I read the whole seven chapters in 3 hours, no lie! I would LOVE to see more soon!

I'm also going to start reading some of your other works, but I hope to for an update for this as soon as possible :]

-J

.W.O.W. Okay, seriously, I'm hooked. First chapters really need to captivating for me to continue reading, and TRUST me, I'm dying for more. So, reading on I am. :]

-J

love it!

I like this story a LOT! It took me a while to get into it, but I'm now thoroughly hooked!!

Collections 101

hello ^^, i just read your story colletions 101 and i‘m shocked to see you have no more reviews. it is very good, no 08/15 story (in my country it‘s a common sentence for storys without much story or so similar like a lot of outhers and so without new ideas). do you now why i must grin not last time before? mom fp.com has a lot of problems with the page (often i can‘t read without one times they say sorry try it later blabla) and so i look to the other two storys i choose to read in the near futur and voila, i read your name one time and a second time too. ^_^ so, i think i am a reader who do you will see more often. (maybe, i‘m a often to laszy to write a comment, okay, often because in english the people doesn‘t rewrite and so i think they doesn‘t a review from a person with an other native language than english) i hope i can read chapter 7 soon and find out, that you write more in the next time.

cu meryl koyama ^^y

This is a really interesting society you've created.

hi there!!

i just came across this story n i hv to say it's brilliant!the characters unique n different!

i can't wait for the next update!

i like Jackal, his jealousy is too cute. Can't wait for the next update.

oh a love square! It is getting really iteresting! Good Job!

Enjoyed this chapter.The interactions between Jackal and Lynx are the parts I like the most, personally. Jackal is an interesting character.Angel, however, is not that likeable at this point. He's like a third wheel. The arrogant teen that has the "I get what I want" mindset and all it does is make you want to knock him down a few notches.I'm assuming you know where you're going with this (or that the characters do) but I would rant and rave and throw a major hissy fit if Angel manages to make more headway with Lynx than Jackal does. He's just annoying. Like a mosquito buzzing around your ear or something. *lol*

Love this story though, and look forward to the next update!

cool ** story, i wish I was a bounty hunter now..lol, i like your characters, especially Lynx(great name, btw). Sexual tension is good thing. can't wait for the next chapter!

Hmm. Wonder if that last bit means the bodyguards are going to show up and try to kill Jackal?Hope not.Anyways, thus far I like how you've depicted the characters and allowed the plot to develop a great deal. I look forward to reading more, also.