I like this poem: It seems to flow out of you. It's very good, the words used, the imagery, the rhyming.I liked this line in particular: "And free from your shame" and the last line is a good ending :)(thanks for your review by the way)

Oh, wow. Your way with words is amazing!! I can take this to heart... I had something similar done to me...

Very good, I must say!! I'll be checking back to see when you update!!

--Raven

ooh...I like how well your rhyming is and it never sounds forced. I really like this one... :hugs: your poems are always so sad sounding though. Don't be sad... ^_^

love xox

Excellent poem filled with anger and honesty. I'm sorry that you got hurt like that.

oh yes, i really feel this one. the feeling is a bad one, to be betrayed, but if you end up better off at the end, i guess that everything has its reasons.

anyway, it doesnt sound forced, and i like it because it is direct, and to the point. plus it is good to vent anger!

Claire