and another! the salt stinging is really good! i love the feminiity of your poems (amongst everything else ive already said i love!) will stop harassing you with reviews!

O.O This was absolutely gorgeous. I loved your lines, they were deep and quite thought-provoking indeed. Excellent work.

‘cause i don’t think he realizes you’re only with me

to clean up his mess

(don’t cry for me, sweetie, the salt stings)

Absolutely beautiful. I empathize with the last line...=| And the two before it are just...amazing! x

theres alot of raw emotion in your writing. i really love it.

oh wow... wow... I absolutely love the way this is written. I love the whole thing. This is so good!

i loved the last line. it cares and it hurts and it's so hard to explain but it's beautiful. nice job with this.

Wow.. brutally emotional & painful.. The reverse-bracketed part in the first stanza made me think of a word I couldn't remember & I had to go to dictionary.com to look it up. Here it is: "iconoclastic." (Beautiful, no?) And I love the sugar & salt in the second stanza. It's not a typical break-up poem... but I must say, I love it.

very pretty and semi-raw, which makes it soverylovely. i adore it.

‘cause, baby, bondage doesn’t turn me on((-

that line made me smile.

Overwhelmingly visual. The voice in this is outstanding. Excellent work.