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Reviews For: The Serpent Mask

LancerDragoon 2006-02-20 ch 1,	abuseAh, a good story. Felt a lot like a novel, actually, had it been longer. The characters were expertly written, though traces of some of them have appeared before in your other stories. (Ryan, in particular, but I can't pinpoint who. I just get this feeling...) And speaking of Ryan, he sounds like a better copy of Buffy's Riley, which isn't really a bad thing per but... And Williams is cool! I demand that he appears again sometime soon in the bigger work the world of this story is going to be based on. Oh, I have some complaints, although it is very unlikely you will be able to correct them. The names. They're somewhat confusing: Akhis, Amon and a bunch of other deities with names that start with "A". All in all, this was good, making me crave more for some vampiric action. Oh yeah, I'm very intrigued by the Christian Vampires... any plans to do a story on them? Anyway, this was great. Keep it up!
Autumnymph 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe names can be confusing. A good read. But the ending... It's like some of the movies or series I always see on TV.
Drizit 2006-01-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseMalas nak login. Anyway, this had an "Angel" feeling to it. Except the vampire Will was more Spike-ish than Angel. It definitely had a Buffy feeling to it i'll give you that. In any case, awesome read man. A few mistakes here and there, just like I See Red although i forgot to mention it there. Anyway, i'm a tad confused with the ending. Okay so it has magic involved in it. Anyway remember you wrote that Prof Ashford wore the mask? How the hell could ha have sent it to his office in the first place? Reply to me by dropping a review somewhere i guess ^^

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