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Reviews For: Everyday

Nanashi Dreamer 2006-04-12 ch 1,	I find this poem to be kind of dull, but hey to each there own.
Shadow H3art The Clone 2006-04-10 ch 1,	WELL WELL... White, Your on strike two! I've really getting mad! Can I ask you why? Are yopu Jealous? Jealous of everyones ability to write, you Hitler Bastard! You seem to be the only one WHO appreciates YOUR own works! WHen are you going to grow up? Never? How bout today? Tomorrow? I think YOU should do it soon... You know, you can't off your parents for ever... YOU DO nned a job, and a place on your own! Oh wait, maybe your not mature enough to realize that! Sorry! Maybe You should ACTUALLY listen to your parents, instead of being some wide mouth hole. Thats all I see when you review anything.Haha... Actually I laugh at your comments... yes they make me laugh because, how did you put it, they are 'incoherent'! Only someone who gives remarks like that REALLY NEEDS to grow up and mature greatly! I speak for a lot of people when I say this: What makes you so SPECIAL to flame everybody else? Please answer that ( Too late, I got you blocked) you two faced jerk. You have no clue how much you caused me! Because of you, I ALMOST TOOK MY LIFE, BECAUSE I BELEIVED YOU, YOU SON OF A ! I WISH PEOPLE LIKE YOU WOULD ROT ON EARTH< ALONG WITH ALL OF TE DEAD RATS! ILL ALWAYS RREMEMBER YOU AS THE ! OH THE poem needs to be worked on... why don't you go and practice?
Hutchy 2006-03-26 ch 1,	Why would you miss the way a girl looks at you when you say "goodbye" if you love her? When you love someone, you typically do not want to see them sad. And if she's happy to be rid of you, I guess she's on the right track.
Camaro 2006-03-14 ch 1,	Hmm... for someone that doesn't seem to like "emo" poems, you sure-as- do write them. I'm curious as to why you're such an . haha... no, seriously. Why do you feel the need to go around and flame stories? Jealousy? Boredom? Trying to get a reaction? Well, you're doing a good job. You don't seem to be well received here. I will say that I understand what it's like to have to be the only honest one around and sometimes say what no one else will, but from what I've seen, you seldom even READ the stories/poems you flame. Now, I'm no poet. In fact, I suck at it, hate everything about poetry itself. But I also don't feel it's necessary to go around and pick at everyone else's when it's OBVIOUS that yours needs a bit more work. Why not take more time with your own rather than make an ** of yourself so often on review boards? Just a suggestion. Oh, and do put me up on your "diss list" on your profile. It's oh-so-mature. ::rolls eyes:: Camaro
Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2006-03-09 ch 1,	Yu know, I'd love to bash you, but this is actually pretty good. I am suprised. You wrote something that wasn't a peice of worthless s! claps*
StorySpinner 2006-03-02 ch 1,	look, i am sorry if you don't like my work. But you don't have to be so harsh, i have never done anything wrong to you. And how do you know what i can feel, or cannot just because i am 18?You don't know me.And as far as my poem entitled 'rape' goes. I apologise if you have read a similar thing before. I'll think about that next time i write something personal, beacuse obviously other peoples experiences are something to be mocked. Thanks a lot. I don't know what i did to deserve your wonderful reviews, but thank you so very much.**.On the other hand, i quite like this poem of yours. It's simple, but it says a lot.Well done
brokendreams21 2006-01-26 ch 1,	Interesting. There's simplicity yet something so much more. I just have one question. Was there supposed to be a rhyming scheme? I'm really curious. Anyhow, very well written! Keep up the great work!
just a teardrop 2006-01-25 ch 1,	Learnt: irregular verb. Learnt is more common in British English, (learned in American English).
backseats on thursdays 2006-01-25 ch 1,	Inspiring. It gives you the need to go through another day...
Faithless Juliet 2006-01-25 ch 1,	I like the simplicity of this (It’s not really good bye, It’s just see you later) I love the hopefulness of that. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.

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