I loved this story! I loved all the characters and Jason made me laugh. I read alot of stories here and most of them are about school age teenagers in love, though they are good I enjoy them too. Its just good to read something different and with adults. lol. Thanx.

pretty sure i just fell in love with an awesome story :)
you did brilliantly in writing it and i'm glad i read it as a whole
i doubt i could wait for chapter after chapter haha
but i love the characters
isabella is so sweet and so nice
and parker is adorable and yet so bad boy which is always appealing
i loved them together - they're just too cute for words
i loved all of it :)
and i'm glad it ended well haha
awesome job writing it. kudos to you :D

izzie

I live in Indianapolis, Indiana how koll is that man!

now i get why it was calle table for two for! i feel like...i just had that really strong blonde moment.

this is a really awesome story... how i wish that "sweet and caring" Parker is real. haha i adore this story to bits. i can't wait to read more of your works. congrats for a job well done! :)

Aww i loved it! :D

This is a wonderful story! I loved it! You are a great writer. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Great story, keep up the good work.

hiya

great story. I really enjoyed reading it and sort of wished there was more to read. :)

Congrats on finishing this story.

Angel

You're right about it being cheesy, but it's such a cute story, that the cheesiness is okay.

yey. Can't wait to finish this story.

oh, what's going to happen...

Oh you're the same author who wrote Big Tex! I remember that :) Made me irrationally love Texas and want to go there, even though I really have no desire to go there, lol. Anyways, this was a cute story. And you're right, it was fluffy, but it was cute and a nice read and really just something to get myself lost in. I think you're good at writing stories like that, haha.

Anyways, I don't really have much to say. I wonder why Thomas was so protective of Bella though if he was gay anyways. I guess it was probably just the whole competition thing that he and Parker had going on. Thanks for sharing this story with us! I hope you continue to write more stories :)

-- Alyssa

Very cute and fluffy, although the spelling and grammar errors took away from it a bit, but maybe that's just me. (It's is when you say it is, and its is for possession. Always :P) Otherwise I liked this story quite a bit. Keep writing!

Good story, i couldn't help but feel that it was an abrupt ending (but maybe thats just because i wanted nmore:D). Other than the fact that Bella and Parker didn't have very many obstacles to overcome, it was a good read. Keep up the good work!

Kon