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Reviews For: Trying to Find Peace

Comawhite13
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseIt's a great poem :)

It's got awesome rhythm and this one sounds really good rhyming. :D Yay!
Aryanda
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseit was so very true, and it was magnificent. good job, and keep it up!
alice is dying
2006-03-14
ch 2,
abuseThis is great!

Most writters who try for this kind of rhyme and format often make it look childish and can't really do anything amazing with it. You, however, pulled it off flawlessly.

I love this!
jesusfreak9588
2006-02-19
ch 2, anon.
abusei like this. it's very good, you've done something I can't seem to do anymore: pull off a rhyme scheme and make it awesome. i promise one day I will. but to answer your question... I took it out of curiosity. it was fun, but i most likely won't do it again.
brokendreams21
2006-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI really like this poem! It's not completely sad. Instead, it has one of those encouraging kind of voices, wanting one to 'find the light'. Very fulfilling. Well written! Great job!
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