It makes me want to cry. I love it very much. You are very talented.

"Yet lovers are not all

At play warmongers, fight

To have their day, see

Slaughter, soldiers

Children too, collateral

Damage, me

& you"-"A cost so easy to accept

After all as people slept

Across the globe still millions

Sighed, rifles sang &

Winter

Cried"

Those are my two favorite verses. I really like this poem: you have done an excellent job with it. It speaks the truth in beautiful words that tear at the heart and make me wonder why everyone can't see it the same way you can. The brutality of war is something that most treat as trivial, and half the peoples of the earth couldn't tell you why another is at war. We as nations are all caught up in the deadly game of suicide by war and national expense. My hat is off to you for choosing to write on this subject. You've said your say, in a powerful, compelling, and painful manner. Wonderful job!

Thanks for your reviews too.:)

Excellent interior rhyme in places. You hit on some important points, while remaining lyrical and delicate with the words you choose. The word choice has a heavy sweetness that makes this a wonderful read.

A very dramatic piece, which puts across a very solemn message. You have a very unique style, I love the way you write with such rythm and mood.

Excellent poem keep up the good work!

I especially love the last stanza...its a rare list of lines tied together

Such strong language on wars and battles. It's amazing. You can make the reader actually feel the pain. And the association with winter is great. Keep up the great work and good job!