You have a very deep and unique way of looking at the world. I commend you for it! Good job! It's very sad isn't it?

This is an amazing peace. The way it's written is genius. ^_^

Faving.

This is was amazing. The originality of it is wonderful. I do hope you keep writing poetry and the like, you do so really well.

I LOVED this. It was so deep and so inspiring.

~Puppy~

oh wow! this is so original. i love it. i love the format of it. i especially love the first line. beautiful work.