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Reviews For: friday 16th september

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2007-10-05
ch 1,
abusethis is just beautiful nice job
by His blood
2006-10-22
ch 1,
abuseher birthday is september 16. but she's gone, so it doesn't matter.

ps. your writing is
(you are)
so beautiful

♥ alison
bleed gilead
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abusei love how you put so clearly forth in use of repetition, spacing, commas, how nervous the speaker is. love especially "only her initials & i wrote them on my hand."- it's such a clear and hopeless image.
the naked civil servant
2006-03-28
ch 1,
abuseoh. i love you. you're so sweet & umbrella-like. please, tolerate my admiration, i, a lone and hungry octopus.
just a teardrop
2006-01-25
ch 1,
abuseoh i love this! really beautiful! :D gorgeous work.
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