YOu have a knack for these... you don't see writing like this much.

This is a subject matter that has been tackled from many different angles, from many different perspectives, this is a example of a good one.

Wow! This is amazing! So honest and raw and beautifully written that it is almost intoxicating...

My favourite lines are 'The glistening, glittering mess/ Of dirty eyes and skin and hair'.

Thank you for reviewing my poem by the way :) I have really enjoyed all of your work that I have read! xx

Simply beautiful.