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| Arutha 2006-01-25 ch 1,   | Wow, that's awesome. I like how you took the villanelle and gave it a kind of classical feel with the words. I mean, "magistrate" and "freight" as well as some of the verbage and whatnot just goes together so wonderfully. I love the wording in this so much. I would take out "as his tent" and just stop that line at "night," though, but other than that it's flawless. Great job, keep it up ;P |