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| Herminia 2006-02-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis is great. I like the tone of your poem. It sounds so formal because of the diction. Great job and keep it up! |
| FuzySliperz 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abusewhoa. it's really good. the rhyming and the words. just very very good. |
| La Velvetine 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is cool. Is it about the Greek god of the north wind? I like it. The personification and imagery is nicely done, though your meter falls apart here and there. But still very cool. |