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Shades of Gray
fairytale failure
2006-09-21 . chapter 1
scuttling...thats the way this poem feels. The rhyme scheme doesn't seem quite natural though. I do especially love the last four lines, though.
Herminia
2006-02-14 . chapter 1
Wow. This is a most excellent description of ink/printer (am I right?). Well done!
FuzySliperz
2006-01-26 . chapter 1
omg it's so good. i love thyming poems and it's annoying when it seems like someone tried to hard to rhyme, but this is so good and i understand it. ur poetry is amazing
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