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| fairytale failure 2006-09-21 ch 1,  | abusescuttling...thats the way this poem feels. The rhyme scheme doesn't seem quite natural though. I do especially love the last four lines, though. |
| Herminia 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is a most excellent description of ink/printer (am I right?). Well done! |
| FuzySliperz 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseomg it's so good. i love thyming poems and it's annoying when it seems like someone tried to hard to rhyme, but this is so good and i understand it. ur poetry is amazing |