Reviews for An Angel and Her Fate

Reviews For: An Angel and Her Fate

Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 11,	abuseAh!! AWESOME!! I loved it so much! Amazing ending this story is beyond words. I think there's a phrase in this chpater that summarizes up your story, "There was blood, there could never be creation without it..." I love that...Anyways, awesome job on an awesome story. You were a part of your story, I know it sounds weird but there was a part of you in it. You know, behind the scenes, heh. Thanks for an awesome read and I will come back to read more of your amazing work. Loved it all and enjoyed it to bits!
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 10,	abuseOh no! Is Eno aware of the wings that are coming out of her back!? Ah! What's gonna happen next!? What's the Angels' motive for what she did!? Okay, why am I still here!?
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 9,	abuseShe's saw...and the Angel...Ah!! This is so god!! I love this story! Just wanted to point something out though... " “Why did you come to me in the first place?” Eno asked. “Why ask...you like it.” Eno snorted at the reply. " You meant to put "the Angle snorted at the reply" right? No big. ^-^
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 8,	abuseNow I think the Angel is evil...I thought she would refuse to do such a thing. I assumed they both cared about each other...in their own way or another. Don't worry though, I still love this story!
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 7,	abuseWhoa, never would've thought of that. Okay, I understand the "soul-less" part now. This was an iteresting topic, no pun intended. Um...the only thing that I think you should fix is the uploading of the chapter. You uploaded the last chapter along with this one. No big, I just got confused for a moment until I scrolled down, heh!
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 6,	abuseWhoa...I know it rude and mean, but I like the scene in the church. As I was raeading this chapter I was wondering if the Angel had a name. Don't get me wrong the fact that you call her "the Angel" is cool and adds emphases to her damnation, but I really do wonder if she has a name or if she has to earn it or something. That aside I also wanted to tell you that every chapter I read adds more to the relationship these two individuals have. It gives it more delicacy yet it seems solid enough to withstand anything. Good job!
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 5,	abuseAnother impacting ending. The only thing that confused me was when the Angel was telling Eno about her facination with her. "“Yes, you fascinated me. Those that are born with no soul normally die just after birth. No will to live you know. You, you lived though. I think that’s what interested me first.”" Do you mean Eno was born without a soul? If that's ture, I wanna know more about that. Maybe your view on this whole "soul" thing. I don't understand what you meant by "born with no soul". Okay, I shall continue! ^-^
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 4,	abuseAnother brilliant chapter! Loved the ending phrase! I liked the relationship you've placed between these two individuals. There are several emotions entwined between them two it's amazing! I love your style of writing and am so surprised people haven't noticed it! This story is amazing plus I love how you can name the chapters so flawlessly! I'm jealous! I can't do that I just put "chapter one" hehe! I'm cheap!!
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 3,	abuseOh...I don't know why but I loved that chapter. It was like a sorrow filled song, weaving between two destined individuals. Ha! Now your story is inspiring me...hehe. But I seriously enjoyed this chapter. ^-^
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 2,	abuseKinda short but I enjoyed the dialouge. This story has me questioning so many things!! I wanna know why the Angel is there...why she doesn't want to talk about it...Ah! Maybe if I read on I'll find out, huh? Okay, will do!
Lady Sakaki 2006-01-27 ch 1,	abuseWow...I can't believe you don't have any reviews!! This first chapter is amazing, I loved it. The wording and phrases gave it a nice flow and the imagrey gave it life. The atmosphere was dark yet full of life. Cool! ^-^

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