I enjoyed it, and I'm sure many others would enjoy it just as much if they had a chance to read it. The only thing I think you could improve on is how long your lines are, but who am I to complain? I couldn't write a decent poem to save my life. Your writing always makes me think about things I normally don't think about. I know you just write to write, but in my oppinion we are only alone when we give up. That is, our friends stop supporting us only when we stop giving our best effort towards our goals, you know? ...but that's just my oppinion.

Write more poems, you're real good at it!

Have a nice day,
-An anonymous reviewer

i feel alone in a crowd. i understand this. this is great! =)

Verey good but yet sad...