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| ayadora 2006-01-26 ch 1,   | You thought it would give us a kick? Well, it's kicking me, that's for sure... No, really, I like it. Good voice. |
| H.M. Landen 2006-01-26 ch 1, | As the perfect geek and nerd, I am proud to give your story a seal of excellence. Cliche is not the issue; further development of the story will fix cliches. Besides, everything is cliche after awhile: even life. |