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Reviews For: Escape?

ayadora
2006-01-26
ch 1,
You thought it would give us a kick?

Well, it's kicking me, that's for sure...

No, really, I like it. Good voice.
H.M. Landen
2006-01-26
ch 1,
As the perfect geek and nerd, I am proud to give your story a seal of excellence. Cliche is not the issue; further development of the story will fix cliches. Besides, everything is cliche after awhile: even life.
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