Reviewing! Finally! Anyway, I really like this. The story, the style, how it's told, etc. Very well done. :)

The only issue that I've got is in the fourth paragraph, you wrote "I kick his body again, feeling a few ribs break in the process". It sounds as if Tavi Ere's ribs are breaking. O.o'

I really like this one. Now I could bore you with the usual (and many) spelling errors, but I will only point out one because it irritates me... The throne of a king is spelled "throne," not "thrown," as in "I have thrown the ball." I liked the little bit about the hair especially... Really good. Yes yes, fantastic.

Hm, so he's an assassine? Cool! I