o. i like it great structure and great imagery!love it love it! ♥ katlin

WOW...this is brill, i love the twist, goes down very well!!

Ingenious creative idea. Alice and Wonderland is often refernenced to drugs and falling down the rabbit hole is a common metaphor used, but bringing these two together is marvelously done here. It also seems to have the chaos of sprialing down the rabbit hole of cocaine and cutting and most deadly, the toxin you ended on, doubt.

Good job! This says it all. I never saw Alice as an innocent little adventurer, anyway, and now you've brought out the best of a good fairy tale. :)

Wow! That is such an amazing poem! I love the way you have change the fairy tale to a completely different view. It reminds me of these books I read.

Very nice poem. I now see Alice in Wonderland completely different. It's no longer the innocent little adventure. Though it never really was. Since when is Disney purely innocent? That's very well written. Thanks for the poem