I was wondering when you're going to update.

Interesting last bit. (off the last chapter) after reading this and that other piece of yours, I can get a sense of how you write and I think I like it. it's different. You write like you've always got soemthing else on your mind. YOu go off on tangents and still manage to keep form. I like this. I like your style. Descriptions too. Nice job.

This was the saddest story I've ever read. To abuse a child like that is really unforgivable.

I just want to tell you that I think you did a great job, and that the tone and mood of the story was excellent. You brought out the protoganist's tale in the correct mood and everything.

I love the ending too, especially:

Release me…

Release me…

Reles me…

Rle m…

R m…

I love that bit.

Looking forward to see more of your work.

-MD

I really want to feel for Eddie but I just can't. Sure he was exploited and had a rotten childhood. But at the same time his mother did make an effort in the begining before she turned compassion into love. I always wonder when people take this drastic measure to solve thier problems, what does it really solve. His life will still be **, only now he won't have anyone to blame but himself, even though he was victimized, he's no better than his agressors.

I have to say this story drew alot of unwanted emotion from me. That's a hard thing to do and for that you have my respect. You're crafted a very good and powerful story here. At some points it feels generic or cliche but it has a heart felt honesty and realism that so few can capture.

Awesome work and I like the way you think.

I don't know. I mean is it wrong for me to smile at this? I'm not smiling due to some sadistic pleasure of the violence, but rather of the subtle emotions of his mother, and the very idea she was naked, and in those few moments she realized who that was before her, as if she was given a final resolution to absolve herself from this sin, and it made me smile to see she could realize this. Yes I'm a very disturbed individual.

Very deep indeed. Showing the world through the deluded eyes of a monster, that's what I would say. He feels pain and has ever right so, and his actions would personaly justify this misery, but I can only wonder if he sees this act of retribution as selfish or some form of absolution.

An equally powerful chapter, cleaverly disguising the true unconventional manner of the relationship, yet so blatantly put forth to the reader of a situation most children are unwillingly engaged in. I have to say this is really good, in the way you portray innocence and the many evils that currupt it's parth in all forms no matter how gentle they may seem. At the same time it's hard not to feel for all the characters, everything has such a dreamy feel to it against the nightmarish tone.

I'm really like the stragetic use of repetition on certain words, it makes for such a powerful impact. Though some would call this chapter disturbing, I found it more of an indepth look at his mother's psyche. She is still in some ways ill, but I feel she is really detached from the world, and seems to be projecting her pity for Jeremy on Eddit. I could be wrong.

Progressing even deeper into the anarchic aftermath, it's sad at times but in the youth of the character, the minimal reactions are almost espected. For some reason that makes it seem more real, unlike an expected over emotional outburst, but as detailed in the opening chapter, she was never the epitome of the perfect parent, and the slow reconstruction process begins.

Damn that's a very somber yet powerful opening chapter. I love the repetition at the end that ties in the events perfectly. The imagery of the drawing at the beginning was so subtle, but as the chapter progressed it became so clear, and yet this is only the beginning. I must say you've really capture my interest.

Damn, it all just gave me chills. You have surprized me, my friend. This was the shiznit. I didn't want it to end. Keep up the excellent work.

Again... very cool. Very thought provoking...

As a fan of Pearl Jam, at first I was like, ha he's joking, and then... you weren't. To be honest it surprized me. I really liked it. Seriously. I like how you embedded the lyrics all throughout the story. This is pretty creative, even if the storyline's not original - the idea to turn the song to the story is. I will read on...

One of the best stories I've read in a long time. It was better than great, it was marvellously crafted, and those abstract descriptions that tied into every chapter. You are genius.

wow...just wow. that was really good, very good indepth emotion and detail. Keep up the good work ^-^