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| Origami Princess 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseGreat imagery and it's better than my 'Lizbethan. Very, very nice. |
| scapegrace 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAh! I love this one! Such pretty imagery! And no! I am going to try my hardest to keep this up. I would be sad if my writing died again. I really enjoy it.And yeah, I agree. I don't like using 'you' either. I was just too lazy to figure something else out that would connect just as much with the reader. I rewrote it at like, 1 am. |
| 1Wanderer 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseShakespearn sonnets are completely different from what you've written, but it was still a good poem. |
| Skiv 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThat's pretty dang cool, and massively good for a first attempt at, well, anything. I like the useage of "shiv'ring" and "'neath." Noroc!~`Skiv |
| Tortugapoet 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseAw. Very good first "attempt"! (I thought it was successful) Nicely done. -Drea |