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| S. 2006-03-13 ch 3,  | Good plot! But u need to word it better and add more detail! Talk to me tomorrow and i'll give u some advice! Over,all u did a good job! |
| helpless-pretender 2006-02-01 ch 1,  | nice, you rawk, Keep writing :) p.s. Thanks for the review ya sent me |
| xxbstarwxx 2006-01-30 ch 1, | go me im reviewing myself - wow this is stupid well i was bored hope i get more reviews - even if you think it sux review anyway |