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Sunnyboy02 2008-08-27 ch 7,	Oh My. So if you don't update this story soon I will probably go crazy. Just to let you know. :)
l'heautontimoroumenos 2008-07-04 ch 7,	oi, seems good so far. Carry on writing it. Can't wait to see what happens
Elfish Suicide 2007-12-21 ch 5,	This story is GREAT! But that song, "I'll melt with you, is by bowling for soup.
whispers to dead leaves 2006-04-09 ch 7,	This story is A-MAZING. I'm a sucker for anything 'the clash' or English related. I LOVE british accents like you wouldn't believe. And I think I like Matthew more than Jack. I don't know. I wonder why they are so hostile towards each other? Anyway, I'm sorry to cut this short, but I REALLY like this story. It's going on my favorites. I look forward to the next update. J.J. Madison
no one cool 2006-03-25 ch 7,	ah i love your story! kep updating pleasee!
Ghosty 2006-03-22 ch 7,	Loved the new part. Loved it. You see a deeper side of Cally and Jack shows feelings, then Mandy points out the whole conflict between the two...how could you not like it?! lol
typicallyazngurl 2006-03-21 ch 7,	Aw...how sad =_=...I hope you figure out the dad problem for Cally. She seems so sad...
InspiredSpider 2006-03-21 ch 7,	hi. i was dubious about reading this story because when americans write british based stories they usually over exaggerate everything. I am actually English and i live in South London I went to a private performing arts school until I was fifteen and now I'm in a publc college (the equivalent to your junior and senior years) but enough of me- you've done well. I'm glad you dropped those british terms and words because only neeks and boffs say them. Our accents are obviously different but our way of speaking isnt so different. We say alot of the same things (although I do like to walk around my house sometimes with a pipe saying "Indeed Geoffrey, I do concur" LOL). What else? Err... driving isn't so popular in London specifically- we have this thing called congestion charge- you have to PAY to drive in central london, so most people use the tube or buses- but i guess as your characters are quite well off driving makes more sense... i'm trying not to bore you with nitpicking sorry... yeah but i do really like this story i suppose it's the traditional outside view of London not the one i know but it is GOOD ~spider~ p.s. you really wouldn't hear cockney rhyming slang or cockney accents unless you're in extreme east london or go the market or something (poundthelot! poundthelot!) that's it I'm done I promise I won't be so British-ly annoying the next time I review
Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2006-03-21 ch 7,	It's good, but kinda choppy- like one moment shes hanging out with Jack then it cuts to Matts call, it doesnt seem to be running very smoothly. and you have so much happening in one chapter with little detail or explanations... it might be better if you used more descriptions and explained things a tad bit more. this is the 7th chapter and i cant honestly say that i know your main character, Cally. i would have never pinned her as one to like chick flicks because she likes hockey. i wish i understood you characters more and you put more of their character into the story... make them round "cover all your bases" so you and your readers can almost (to an eztent) predict how your character would react in a particular situation. other than that i really like the general plot line of it, its a really good idea it just needs some character work. Winter P.S. sorry i'm a Character Nazi! i really like well develope characters. sorry if i offended you in any way.
A. C. Oasis 2006-03-21 ch 5,	wow, another story set in london :D just like mine!
happygal 2006-03-04 ch 6,	hey. nice story you got there. cute characters. can't wait for the next chapter. will be checking soon for the next one. ;P
jackie 2006-02-27 ch 5,	who's william? i thought she met matthew.
hokulani 2006-02-27 ch 6,	Oh la la, the tension between Matthew and Jack is simmering. Can't wait to see what happens! :)
BangBangYourDead 2006-02-27 ch 6,	Love your story.
blind-ambition 2006-02-26 ch 1,	omg i totally love tyhis sotry!!11!! u gott a updateit soomn

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