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| Narika 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseI love how your poem tells a tale of beauty. The simple words and flowing structure makes the poem a nice read. For you first poem, I'd say it's exceptional. =D |
| kay.m.sea 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abusethis is amazing! what do you mean go easy on me?! i love it! keep it up! |
| PetiteLumiere 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, pretty. This is awesome. I love the topic you chose to write about. You had a wonderful take on beautiful women, I love this poem. Also, thank you for reviewing mine ^_^ There are more chapters to it, eh? Us Canadian writers, with our "eh"s. Hehe. Kati ~PL |
| HopesAndFears 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is beautiful! You delivered your message really well...it was sweet, I almost cried. One of my favourites so far. I love the contrast between inner beauty and physical beauty. This is really inspiring and touching. And if this is really your first attempt at poetry, you have a great talent*~ |
| son of frost 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI like this piece. In a nation where superficiality is attacking us every day, it's good to remember what defines true beauty. We would be better off if we were all blind, then we would have to look for true beauty. Thanks for writing this poem. And thanks for the review! |
| Samara-chan 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. This poem seeps nothing but truth >.< I am amazed. Excellent word choice for everything. Beauty has always been a bit fake, huh? |
| cornered.sensations 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this, good work! |
| Damned Dead Eyes 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuse"She covers her legs to hide her thunder thighs" Haha, love that line. I personally enjoy my thunder thighs. XD I adore the whole poem! Really good for your first time at poetry. Thanks for reviewing btw! ^_^ |
| Burnt Bread 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abusewa... haven't been able to sign in the past few days, comptuer is dodgy. Anyway, first attempt huh? I thought your first piece was pretty poetic. Two things I really liked about the poem and made it stand out: the loose rhyming and the dialouge. I also like how you presented two contrasting views of beauty, making the first one seem shallow and meaningless. Once again, well done. |
| x Blue Orchid x 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseIf this is your first attempt at writing poetry then I must say you possess a natural talent for it. |
| Smoky Bear 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abusethat was pretty good... i like the conversational style, it's well employed. good command of concept although it is a popular misconception as ugly people can be evil, solipsistic and wankerish too lol. great effort... do more :D |
| degenerate elite rabbit 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseare you sure you haven't written anythin before? this smacks of talent. don't be so ** yerself. it's very very good. |