so whats going on with this story now?

Hey, I started reading this a while ago and I could have sworn it had progressed further... Maybe not, but that copyright notice has been back for a very long time now. Have you given up on this story or should I keep checking back? Please let us know!

omg, I love this.

Please, please, please continue. 0=]

I found this story, and loved it. But I was saddened to see it is unfinished, I hope maybe you shall finish it in the future.I think the copyright mess is fixed as of now. It is a really good story, but I fully understand if you aren't able to finish it. I know there have been a few stories that I could never finish for whatever reason. But anyways, even if it s left unfinished I want to say it is a rather good story. It leaves me wanting more, and wanting to understand Jackson's past a little more.

arc

-I seriously love this story and it would make me really
happy if it was updated
-I'm not saying you have to(its your story) but its a really god one and I'm hoping you would consider finishing it
:-)

hey i love this story i cant wait for more if u dont finish it here can i read it on some other site ?

its done?! NO! please tell me its still going and if its not thats ok but i still think it shouldn't be over. alright i really love this. for some reason i've seen your name around Fictionpress but i've never bothered to read your stories until now. i'm glad i finally did. you're a really awesome writer and i'm sure i don't need to tell you that. i'll try to read more of your stories. BYE-BYE!

much HUGS & LOVE ;'],
b.j./H-BGP

p.s.-you and your story are gointa be on my fave author and stories list now!

Not to sound too picky but this story is more of a Rhonda and everyone else fic than a M/M fic. Now I'm not saying it being a M/M fic that all the characters should be having sex. Hell no. But 14 chapters in and the m/m theme is not the main theme at all.

I think by the summary it's decieving to exactly how you've planned this story. If the summary said 'implied M/M' then I would have read the story knowing that the story wasn't primarily about m/m relationships.

"MxM, shounen ai, yaoi, slash stuff" - as stated in your summary is really not (how I read) this story about at all. It would have made more sense if again you wrote 'all relationship and implied m/m'

I'm not obviously saying how you should write your summaries - but if you were going to buy a book and read the blurb, you'd want it to be honest and really not waste your time to actually get into what is considered by the authors the "main couple"

I do apologise if this comes of harsh, not meant to be at all.

I was wondering when you're going to update.

I don't know when they put it back up, but it's there now.
Just thought I'd let you know incase you gave up on FP all together. So, please keep writing and updating! ;D

have you finished this story or updated it on another site?? i looked at your yahoo group, and the adult fanfiction site, but i couldn't find it! i really hope you have updated,i love this story.
~riku~

I do love this story, probably because it just shows what happens when someone is determined to rescue you? Mhm, Rhonda kicks bum, yupyup.

The copyright note is back up, though I have no idea why it was gone in the first place and I'm curious to the reasons - and I'm glad to see more then myself reacted to it's abscence. At least it's as it should be now, so I'll be waiting for the next update. :D

Oh... I hadn't noticed- if you find out anything I'd be interested to know as well. I don't think anyone would like their original work to be unprotected.

I really love this story and how it's coming together. The characters are believable and lovable, I wan't both couples to hook up already! *laughs* I'm usual just into the m/m relationships, but I'm really rooting for Travis and Rhonda too. Very awesome. I hope you continue with another chapter soon.

Okay, I'm off to read your other fics. ^_^

I read this story awhile ago and only now have I stopped being lazy enough to write a review and tell you how much I like this. Jackson and Rick are quite cute and Travis and Rhonda are great as well. Anyhow, hope to see you update this and your other stories soon.