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| servatis-a-pereculum 2007-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseHaha, this is precious. |
| account not in use 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseshamefully enough, my writing is like this. *sigh*. oh well, work the trends, i suppose... anyway-i thought that it was absolutely fantastic. over-used cliches are quite fun, hmm? |
| brandon proctor. 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abusei love fake emo poetry!i bow down to you. yours are much better than mine. |
| liquid-dreams-139 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusei dont get it... so r u the one emo or u dont like emo stuff?? and hey, emo people are people too you know. making fun of them is inhumane |
| Kaykuyo Locke 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseXD I liked this one. I really dont know why, but its interesting o.o;; ^^; -favorites- |
| Nicole Michele 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseOkay, so even though this is mocking how I (used to) write..it cracked me up. For some reasons unknown to me, I like reading emo poems, but by reading this I just realized that I would rather read poems making fun of emo ones :] The only thing I would watch out for is having some emo person jump you and like contaminate you with there tears of blood (b.l.oo.d) or somthing. teehee. I'm a ** and I'm deff. going to hell :] |
| elvenstorm 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseAw some of them are actually good but yeah it is getting totally over used now! Love the poem though, great mixture of humour and proving your point. Keep up the work! |
| Smoky Bear 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseLOL! keep preaching! that fookin rocks dude... |
| bright horizon splash 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseHaha, I love it. There should be an entire genre dedicated to bad emo/punk poetry. Well, I guess I'll go cut myself, since my life is so hard...XD By the way, I love the line from The Cure on your bio. One of my fav' songs. |
| Sunami Silverblade 2006-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseIs this pain--emotion--not a part of life? A friend once told me that we are only human when we are in pain. There should be good times and bad times--but there is no reason to laugh at others in turmoil, no matter how selfish it may seem. If nothing else--just let them be. |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is totally nice...your last two lines just made me smile...and i don't know why but the last line, instead of adding vulgarity in a negative way, it seems effective actually...you did a good job here... truly yours... |
| Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuse'oh-so-**-tragic' Wow... you are right! emo is BAD! hence my penname. For awhile it was "the anti-emo" but my friend wanted me to change it (she hates discrimination and/or stereotyping people.) I love this... funny fomat... how the hell did you get it to work? -benjamin |
| fwaahh 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abuseOh my god! You crack me up!! So typical of an emo person! Although, I must say I use that format, although sparingly. Sometimes must be used very little for them to mean something when they are used. Haha. |
| ronshaberry 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuseYou know, it's funny because 'princess of darkness' and 'ruby gloom' are real pen names on fictionpress, if that made any sense. I love parodies of emos. I hate that format, unless it's in parodies. |
| elasticbobaturtle 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. Pretty much, yeah. |