I've always felt that opening ANYTHING with the word "and" is a bad idea, but otherwise I don't have anything bad to say about this one. It's always sad to read poems like this because they are so truthful; there are many people in the world who are just like this girl, and lots of times they are ignored, or cast out in society for not adhering to the way everyone thinks they should be. In fact, those are often the nicest people you will ever meet.

Remy/The Blind Guardian

ah. very good imagery in this one. i like this one as well.. the pattern, tone and just word used were very smart of you. i love it!