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| Kagoatweed 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abusewell written and vivid, but... could the ending get cornier? :) if i put my finger over the last line: wonderful work. :D |
| Shandi Bandi 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI love my story! It was written as an essay for something we loved, a passion essay. Later, she told me that she loved it. It's ment as a prolong, and later, I'll write some more. |