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| sugarrose12 2007-07-19 ch 1,   | Haha! That's great. It made me laugh. The idea about tasting with your eyes - it's really neat. I never thought of it that way! |
| astral boy 2007-01-31 ch 1, | haha, perfect. a favourite. the title being in capitals made it so much more effective for me. and sorry about my other review. i just realised it was in fact a POEM and not fiction. so i suppose it was meant to be poetic. for some reason i thought it was in the fiction section. anyway cheers! |
| Marguerite Mayfair 2006-09-29 ch 1, | Very clever. Even though I'm merely restating what others have already said, I love how brief this is. It's quite thought-provoking. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-04-13 ch 1, | Wow. I adore it! It has a deeper meaning too! Go you! *applaudes*, write on! ~Anna~ |
| st. maverick 2006-01-27 ch 1, | Deeper meaning, perhaps? Or maybe you just chose that title because you wanted me to think there was deeper meaning. Thus, I would think for about fifteen minutes about the deeper meaning, come up with several philosphical and extremely complicated revelations, and then remember that I have to do all of my homework this period and my best friend just mentally screwed me over. So, in short, it's cute. |
| Evelyn Tan 2006-01-27 ch 1, | O.O Cute! =) I like how it rhymes, and how it ends so shortly. Made me smile a little. xP Why do you not wish to eat though, I wonder? |