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| brokendreams21 2006-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. It had that sense of mystique to it. I loved it. Awesome rhyming scheme too. It worked out SO well! Great job! And I've read up on the famine once, and it was so horrible! You had such strng feelings depicted in the poem and did such a great job of it too! Awesome and keep up the good work! |